 Forever-Doomed
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Date: December 2, 2005 @ 3:47 PM
Very well done, one peice of criticism, though. It is too long, probably because of the excessive number of times one pattern seems to be introduced before a new instrument is added in the beginning.
I am not musically talented in any way, so feel free to disregard me, but i'd much more enjoy this is the opening "empty" sequence wasn't so long.
Other than that. This peice was awesome, i loved the fast paced melodies in combination with the awesome drum peices, you sure did your homework on them.
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 Notary04
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Date: December 2, 2005 @ 8:11 PM
I have to agree, you did go a little repitand happy on this one. Despite the fact that the sequences you subjected to such heavy repetition were awesome, this did detract from the piece.
But as I said, you put some awesome sequences to work here. Some of the polyphony is just great, Especially that wicked sequence around 2:00!
The percussion was great, which is why I was disappointed to see it take such a backseat. I'd really love to hear you write up some pit solos!
This was ambitious. Don't be discouraged that it got a little tiresome 6 minutes in...your first shot at an 8:00 monster isn't going to go down easily with all us impatient streamers here (we expect a nice little 3-5:00 piece that requires little or no patience on our parts  ), so with that said, well done, swift!
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